Words for Humans
Carmen Taran
Business presenters use too many clichés. Have you been in those presentations where people speak about a solution, a value added, or a paradigm shift? Have you heard presenters speak about customer-centric solutions, win-win situations, and holistic approaches? Do you feel connected to those who speak like this?
Buzz words do not build an audience connection because they are obscure and calorie-free. If you wish your audience to focus on what you say and not switch to checking mobile devices during your presentation, avoid lazy clichés and greasy corporate talk in your presentations.
In order to avoid using corporate buzz words, we must first acknowledge the reasons why business presenters might be tempted to fall victims to faded language. There are four reasons:
- Glamorize words. Due to the fact that some business people do not have glamorous jobs, they embellish their words. This is why we often hear flowery phrases such as leveraging technologies and creating strategic alliances and creating knowledge-centric systems to maximize human performance – all of this instead of saying “we provide consulting services.” Instead of these big, empty words, use precise, fresh, and simple words that you would typically share with your friends around the dinner table.
- No expertise. When people speak about “global visions” and “available bandwidth” and “industry phenomena” – all these big words mask lack of knowledge. If these speakers knew what they wanted to convey, you would hear clear words, tasks and names of people, and specific information about what is happening and what needs to be done. Find examples or stories or props or numbers or concrete information to support your statements and avoid speaking in front of an audience unless you are an expert in your domain.
- Deliver happy news. When speakers are afraid to acknowledge reality around them, they start using phrases like conspicuous nonsuccess and thinking proactively. If quality has been down, say that it’s been down; if there is a flaw in your product, say there is a flaw; if you made a mistake, admit it. That’s when language becomes clean and builds a connection.
- Avoid accountability. Those who are afraid of commitment are more prone to corporate clichés. Speak in front of an audience only when you fully believe in what you’re saying and are prepared to stand up for it no matter what. Being accountable purifies your language immediately.
You can see how these principles work in practice. Here are two cliché phrases that may seem innocent on the surface but give the wrong impression about what you offer. The first phrase is “best practices”.
“Best practices,” while acknowledging some standards you follow, might also imply insecurity about your direction. When you don’t know where you’re going, you’re borrowing from other people’s wisdom. It is more persuasive to say “we have developed a product or a service with original features”. Now I am more curious about what you have to offer.
Another tired phrase is “leading edge”. Everyone seems to be on the leading edge and it makes us wonder… how is this possible? If you typed in a search engine the phrase “leading edge,” check out how many results you get. Unless your products or services beat the other millions, avoid using “leading edge.”
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I like this approach. It is not always easy to avoid cliches during a presentation but I suspect it would pay off, as you stated. I agree it is best to know a products strengths and weaknesses so you can actually speak to the product as opposed to using industry cliches that confuse the buyer. Good tip!
this is such refreshing advice in the stale air of corporate speak. A trend today, thankfully, seems to be honesty in business. It is time that we practice that honesty by using straightforward, clear language.
Thank you for the reminders. It is so true and so easy to forget that we lose people when we speak in Cliches. In addition, a good reminder that our language should be clear so that listeners of various cultures can capture the exact meaning of our presentations.